1 - On line 219, replace "All reported rates are instantaneous rates in the parametric conversion part of the cooling or photon generation cycle." with "All reported rates are instantaneous rates in the parametric conversion part of the experiment cycle."

2 - We would prefer to replace all occurrences of acronym "OD" with the symbol "$D$". In detail, by line:
    240: remove "(OD)"
    243: replace "the OD" with "$D$"
    250, 253, 263, 280: replace "OD" with "$D$"
    caption Fig. 8, axis label Fig. 8: replace "OD" with "$D$"

3 - Accepted

4 - Accepted

5 - The correct reference for Ref. [14] is:
 Gerhard Schunk, Ulrich Vogl, F Sedlmeir, Dmitry V Strekalov, A Otterpohl, V Averchenko, H G L Schwefel, Gerd Leuchs, and Christoph Marquardt.
 Journal of Modern Optics, 2016 vol. 63 (20) pp. 2058-2073.
 https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/09500340.2016.1148211

6 - At the moment Ref. [35] is only available on arXiv.

FQ - The extracted funder is correct, they just like to be cited the way it is
written in the manuscript; their fundref ID is
http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/501100001381
The second institution, "Ministry of Education, Singapore" has a fundref ID
http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/501100001459 - hope this helps.

Thanks & Best Regards,

Christian Kurtsiefer